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Whiskey, Writing & Moonshots's avatar

Loved the depth and clarity of: "She flashed that smile, the one that had fooled him early in life and now raised every crimson standard in his defenses."

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John's avatar

A very nice piece of writing! Ratatoskr is a nice touch. I hope this is just the start.

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Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Wow o wow, this is so good!

So more to the story!!!!

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Asteria Geisterblum's avatar

Little Sir Menace has his first cameo, aww 🥹 I’m so invested, though, please tell me this story continues next Friday 😂💛 I need to know if Claudia was right and if so, what the professor can do about it

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Sean Nordquist's avatar

This was originlly supposed to just be a one-off, and then I realized there is a lot more to tell! And I *had* to include LSM!!! (And I need a real one for my desk!)

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Asteria Geisterblum's avatar

There’s so many questions left open, but the way you introduced all the elements was so smooth, it really ended way too fast

So if you ever do continue this, I’ll be right back to see where things are going and what history he and Claudia have, it was so interesting

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Joshua Kay's avatar

Oh man, this is so good, but now I can’t wait to see where this might go!

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